Friday, November 11, 2016

Veterans Day: November 11, 2016

Why is November 11 Veterans Day?
It is the anniversary of the signing of the WWI Armistice.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Veterans_Day
"The Armistice of 11 November 1918 was an armistice during the First World War between the Allies and Germany... It went into effect at 11 a.m. Paris time on 11 November 1918 ("the eleventh hour of the eleventh day of the eleventh month")..."
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Armistice_of_11_November_1918 

PERSONAL NOTE:
My father was a veteran of the First World War. As one of the first American soldiers at the front, he served with a machine gun battalion and then was captured and held as a prisoner of war for a year.
November 11, 1918 has a special meaning for me, because at that time my father was near death at the prison camp. Everyone in Germany, especially prisoners of war, were starving due to the Allied Blockade. If signing the armistice had taken another month, my father would probably have died and I would not be here today to write this blog.

                                                                             
Anthem for Doomed Youth (1918)
By Wilfred Owen
As a poet myself I wanted to put my own interpretation on this powerful World War I poem. I have taken the liberty of breaking Owen's original poem into more lines because I think it creates the pauses and emphasis that is needed when reading this. -- My apologies to Wilfred Owen and his remarkable poem.
Original poem line breaks: http://www.warpoetry.co.uk/owen2.html

Original manuscript showing Owen's revisions and suggestions by a fellow poet.

 What passing-bells 
 for these who die as cattle? 

 — Only the monstrous anger 
 of the guns. 
 Only the stuttering rifles' 
 rapid rattle 
 Can patter out their hasty orisons. 

 No mockeries now for them; 
 no prayers nor bells; 
 Nor any voice of mourning 
 save the choirs, 
 — The shrill, demented choirs 
 of wailing shells; 
 And bugles calling for them 
 from sad shires. 


 What candles may be held 
 to speed them all? 
 Not in the hands of boys, 
 but in their eyes 
 Shall shine the holy glimmers 
 of goodbyes. 
 The pallor of girls' brows 
 shall be their pall; 

 Their flowers 
 the tenderness 
 of patient minds, 


 And each 
 slow dusk 
 a drawing-down 
 of blinds. 

                                                                                       

This poem has been interpreted by a number of people.
What follows are several YouTube videos of this work:

Benjamin Britten: War Requiem: What passing bells for these who die as cattle?

Sean Bean reads Wilfred Owen's Anthem for Doomed Youth

A modern interpretation by Jos Slabbert 
Anthem for Doomed Youth

Wednesday, October 26, 2016

The Written Word Is Not the Spoken Word

 The Written Word Is Not the Spoken Word 

Abe Lincoln reading to his son Tad.

 The written word 
 is not the spoken 
 conversational word 

(TOP) "The earliest known draft of the United States Declaration of Independence
a fragment in the handwriting of Thomas Jefferson. June 1776."
https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Composition_draft.jpg
The numerous words that were crossed out, inserted 
and changed shows how the written word is usually crafted.
(BOTTOM) Top of a finished polished Declaration of Independence 
published version, known as a broadside. 

 The written word is molded, 
 crafted and polished 

 And does not include 
 the body language and 
 the silent  expressions 
 of speech 



Tuesday, October 4, 2016

Sputnik, October 4, 1957


 LAUNCH OF SPUTNIK 
 OCTOBER 4, 1957 
 Personal Stories 
 Eight grade, age 13, Sharon, Connecticut 
 Pete, the town wino, tells us he saw it 


"A replica of Sputnik 1, the first artificial satellite in the world to be put into outer space..."

 Waiting for a ride to school 
 in the chill of dawn 
 the town wino comes up to us 
 pointing to the sky 

 "That thing those Russians put there  
 going around the Earth... 
 I saw it," 
 he says slurring his words, 
 "...a little silver ball" 


We stood in front of this building waiting for 
our ride to school in Sharon, Connecticut. (Google Earth)

 We laughed 
 at Pete 
 but underneath we shivered 

 Because as young boys 
 soon to be draft age 
 we knew 
 we would be involved 

Wounded during a military operation in Vietnam in 1967, 
10 years after the launch of Sputnik.


Tuesday, September 27, 2016

A True Writer Must Write

  AUTHORSHIP  
 Age 13, Sharon Connecticut, 1957 

 To be a  poet  is a condition rather than a profession. 
 Robert Graves 


 At the age of thirteen 
 I knew this: 

Working draft (left) of The Tyger (opening line: Tyger Tyger burning brightand finished poem with illustration (right). 
William Blake produced a large body of work but did not worry about his audience and was virtually unknown. Only years after his death would he be considered one of the great Romantic writers and painters.

 Whether my writing 
 was good or bad, 
 liked or disliked 
 was not important 

Orson Welles (right)
-- whose fictional radio program, War of the Worldscaused a sensation -- 
being interviewed by writers and reporters.

 I had no choice 
 but to be a writer 



Thursday, September 22, 2016

Autumn Equinox, September 22, 2016

 AUTUMN EQUINOX 
-- when day and night are equal --
 September 22, 2016 

 Derived from the Latin: 
 equi = equal 
 nox = night 



 With electric lights 
 and central heat 


 we have 
 forgotten 
 the delicate 
 balance 


 between 
 Earth 
 & 
 Sun 


Text, design & research by Rick Doble. All images are from commons.wikimedia.org unless otherwise noted.

Friday, September 16, 2016

The Power of Words, The Limitation of Words

 The Power of Words 
 The Limitation of Words 

 Give & Take 



One of the first forms of writing:
 an early style of Sumerian writing about 4600 years ago on a clay tablet.

 Language 
 gives us 
 the freedom and power 

A page from the ABC trim alphabet book
a French book used to teach children the alphabet -- this page is for the letter B.

 to communicate 

 via our shared virtual reality 

 of symbols 






 Words 
 imprison us 
 with their generalities -- 


 removing us 
 from the specific beauty 


 and uniqueness of life 


Friday, September 9, 2016

One Year Anniversary Online: Haiku-like Poetry

 One Year Anniversary Online: 
 Haiku-like Poetry 
 43 poems & short quasi-essays 


 These poems 
 aim for the intersection 

Starlings swarming.

 of thought and imagery 


 reason and intuition 


 words 

and the wordless